Alright so i got a bit bored and decided to make a story, so here it is and please leave feedback.

 

This is the Minichlorian Chronicles

 

The year was 2588 and the Minichlorian Empire was prospering. It was what some would say experiencing a golden age. The economy was strong as well as the agriculture and military. The Commander who was in charge of the minichlorian home planet was Commander Lynch. As the commander looked out side of his vessels command center he said "Our home planet Prometheus looks lovely today" and the crew agreed with him when they saw the suns rays hit the planet and cause it to let off a beautiful glow of light.

 

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The people throughout the empire were enjoying a time of peace as well as the military. Even the emperor Maximus was enjoying the peace.

 

But all of a sudden the planet's scanner's picked up a large number of ships, and all of a sudden a very large fleet appeared out of the blue

 

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The fleet engaged commander Lynch and his fleet right away. As the commander tried to mobilize his fleet, the enemy already destroyed 25% of the planet's defending forces. Emperor Maximus sent a message out to the commander ordering him to engage the enemy. Commander Lynch ordered his crew to scan the enemy fleet to find out who was attacking. The scans were able to trace the enemy's emblem and found out that it was the Lazarian Empire's fleet.

 

As the battle went on commander Lynch was able to mobilize his fleet and went on the offensive. The Commander told his crew "Alright men this is our Finest hour, Our Empire has enjoyed countless years of peace and now it is time to show our enemy that our golden age didn't make our mighty army soft" Every one's moral rose and started to engage the enemy fleet.

 

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The minichlorian fleet engaged the enemy and started to pound the hell out of the enemy. The minichlorians were on the urge of victory when all of a sudden....

Edited July 7, 201214 yr by Captain America

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