I knew what he meant I think it still looks decent like that though. Should I remove anything?I like this better than your first, the darker background seems more 'appropriate' with the picture.
It would probably look better if the ships were shifted left a little, more centered imo. Or they could be moved further one direction and something else could be thrown in.
I like having my name a different color than the rest of the text to add contrast, all text the same color is boring and too many variations, with a few exceptions, becomes too wild.
Also what I think Davian was saying about the transparency thing is you can notice a light grayish blue across the top where the sig ends.
That all said, definitely better than the first.
@Davian, I don't have to.
